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You are made of bone, sinew, gristle, synapse, skin, keratin
not inkwells and Hemingway, galaxy-cuttings and star-trimmings
or dream, Edgar Allen Poe, absinthe, reflections and sin.
You know a hundred words to describe every pockmark that dots
your face and the way your pens fit into arrow-quivers by that
ricketty old desk of yours but

Words will not
fall
from your mother-of-pearl lips
(willingly.)

Apply cleverly-done descending letters here
and sprinkle one jaunty hyphen across the page
because after all, punctuation is a hitchhiker
and you're speeding down the word count like a cargo truck
till you crash into an abrupt ending or more likely
a lack of poetic inspiration.

Today and yesterday and seven days before, you might have
prostituted your muses, a penny for your thoughts, looked with
cross-eyes at your empty lined pad of paper and then
wrote seven pages about a cloud you saw that eventually scattered
into dreamy folds and smoke.

The sky is blue.
The sky is big.
Apply 'the sky is the limit' cliche here.
Close notepad, exit stage left.

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for the first time ever, i have penned an ironic poem.
i go through phases of loving my work and thinking it is the best i could have done, then glaring at it and thinking 'why won't you sound like carol ann duffy? everyone likes carol ann duffy, even though her style and mine are different.' today i decided i would break myself out of that poetic dismay and write an ironic poem about poetry.
poem-ception.
this is not about me. i would never write 'the sky is blue.' it is never blue in england.

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I'd like to imagine it's because I'm so tired but I doubt any energy would bring proper praise from me so I'll leave you with a thank-you and the knowledge that you help.
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*Anatopist May 25, 2013  Student Writer
I'm very glad you like it! :)
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*thelanyi Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I'm not usually a fan of poetry but this one made me stop and I'm very glad I read it. :clap:
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*Anatopist Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
I'm very glad you liked it, especially because you're not usually a fan. ^.^
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=SilverInkblot Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my journal :)
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*Anatopist Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! C:
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I really like this one.
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*Anatopist Apr 26, 2013  Student Writer
Glad to hear.
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=HillsOfMyst Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured here!
I'd really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and :+fav: the journal :heart:
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*Anatopist Apr 26, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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