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You are firing words into space at stars that will never understand.
Let them guess. Have you ever tried explaining to them that you'd like to
pluck them from where they stand to glue them to your ceiling?
They don't know you like I do, they don't know you're scared of the dark.
Comets and asteroids are tricky things. They'll burn a hole through your roof
so I hope you like the troposphere singeing your nostrils.

'What do you suppose stars do after they become supernovae?'
'They become neutron stars. Or black holes, I guess.'
You went quiet after that.

Maybe I should have said that they stay beautiful forever like Hollywood
would have you believe. I could have said that they blaze on and on
for as long as the universe wants to keep us held in the clutches of spiral
galaxies. That they linger on and become what makes up a newborn child
and the last breath of people who have seen eight decades and more. That
they filter down into the shells of your ears and become the fabric and sinew
of what dreams taste like. They taste like cotton candy, by the way.

'If you could be anything astronomical, what would you be?'
'I'd be a comet. No, an astronomer, to be able to see all of that.
Or maybe I'd be a comet and marry an astronomer. What about you?'
'I'd be a supernova. Beautiful, and then I'd hope to become a black hole.
When I go down, everything is going down with me.'
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(and we will dine on stardust).

Sometimes it is okay to be an asteroid rather than a sun.
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Mood: Love ~ScribensAngelus Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'They taste like cotton candy, by the way'
I love that line, so much.
'I'd be a supernova. Beautiful, and then I'd hope to become a black hole. When I go down, everything is going with me.'
Perfect.
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*Anatopist Apr 26, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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*fee-absinthe Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Would it be ok if I made some illustrations with this poem for the university? Giving you the credit, of course. I just love your writings and I would love to do something with this poem. Feel free to contact me via note <3
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*Anatopist Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
By all means, go ahead! C:
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*fee-absinthe Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! I'll let you know when I'm ready so I can show you the results (:
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*Anatopist Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome. C:
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~SharpieGirl01 Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would be a supernova too.
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*Anatopist Sep 28, 2012  Student Writer
It's quite a nice thing to be. :)
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~SharpieGirl01 Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mm-hmm =)
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~dweckie Sep 1, 2012  Student Writer
This is truly stunning :heart:
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